Review Detail of madskie00017 in Surrender to Grief

Though, it is still 3 chapters. All I can say amazing such great weaving of emotions in your creation. The flow of every chapter is not distracting. Such heavy and deep vibes that I feel like drowning in it. My only issue is that there are paragraphs that are too congested. The author could try breaking some parts to make it less dragging. Keep it up! More chapters please!!