I have not read the story yet, but the synopsis sounds like something a person with Chuunibyou Syndrome would write in my opinion. Do not take it as an insult. Keeping a synopsis simple can also be good.
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LIKELemonGrenade:I just borrowed inspiration from the synopsis of other novels and used it to create my own style. I try to keep the synopsis simple and short but detailed enough for the reader to get a general idea of what the story is going to be about without spoiling much. A long synopsis can make someone interested bored if they have to read so much.
Thank you for your input. I'll try to improve the synopsis I write. Unfortunately I wouldn't be able to edit this synopsis due to the server I post the book on but if you wouldn't mind could you give me some tips on how to write a better synopsis for future works. I'd really appreciate your input and advice.😊
I just borrowed inspiration from the synopsis of other novels and used it to create my own style. I try to keep the synopsis simple and short but detailed enough for the reader to get a general idea of what the story is going to be about without spoiling much. A long synopsis can make someone interested bored if they have to read so much.
PuddingCupBby:Thank you for your input. I'll try to improve the synopsis I write. Unfortunately I wouldn't be able to edit this synopsis due to the server I post the book on but if you wouldn't mind could you give me some tips on how to write a better synopsis for future works. I'd really appreciate your input and advice.😊