I agree with the other people's opinions of the book, the only thing that stuck out for me was the apparent repetition of the portrayal of emotions of the character, but if this is how you want to write the story, then I do not have any qualms of the matter. Character development is getting there, I'm intrigued as to what he will discover about himself, the vivid description of a scene adds depth if I might add, guess we'll see how you'll twist this kind of flavor, for personally, I've had read many books with such vivid scenes, I think I'd want to take a break from them first, but nonetheless, good job dear author, keep writing.
Michael Gesellchen
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