Writing quality is pretty good. Author has some grammatical errors but it's easy to overlook them. Story development is very detailed. Author thoroughly explains the settings, the mc's thought process/actions. Cool thing author does is showing different POVs of the same scenarios which gives you a broader view of what's happening. Only thing author mainly needs to work on is the updating stability aspect which I'm sure will be gone soon after they get into a steady writing environment. Overall, story is amazing and keeps making you wanting more. Yikes, I wrote a lot 😬😄
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