Review Detail of vinayraj in My Cultivation System
Review detail
Hello everyone, You can see the author tag beside my name. Yes, I am the author of this book. I am here to give some detailed review of the story. - The book will have some grammatical mistakes, so if you can bear those little ones, I can guarantee that you will enjoy the story. - No Harem Since it is a cultivation story, many readers think, it might be a harem; however, I don't plan to add Harem to it. - Starting will a slow; however, it will be smooth after initial world building and characters introduction. - MC will be ignorant about many things in the beginning but he will learn things with time - Romance Some readers asked me whether it has romance or not. Yes, there will be romance; however, it will be short. - The story will be very long. So, please stick with me till the end. Hmm...that's it. I hope it is helpful and if you have any doubts, you can ask here. Thanks for reading my book.
My Cultivation System
vinayraj
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I'm really happy there's no harem. Harems seems to spoil most cultivation novels as the MC usually is focused on becoming stronger and don't have much time for all the women. Also, the women are usually weak and the MC has to always protect them which is not always feasible since he has to leave them most times to become stronger.
honestly the only novel ive seen do decently with the harem tag was martial world, partly because the harem ended at 4, instead of the 8-14 far to many stories have
M_Vanesto:I'm really happy there's no harem. Harems seems to spoil most cultivation novels as the MC usually is focused on becoming stronger and don't have much time for all the women. Also, the women are usually weak and the MC has to always protect them which is not always feasible since he has to leave them most times to become stronger.
I’m disappointed that the romance will be short. I think cultivation stories are perfect for romance, as a powerful and long-lived MC is going to be popular with the opposite *** and a perfect candidate for finding someone to spend all those years with. Unless someone writes a story about a weak sissy MC who will die young, which sounds like a terrible story, lol. A story where the love interest gets strong too and stays with the MC would be awesome. Monarch of Time is the only novel I’ve read recently where the love interest stays with the MC and gets stronger alongside the MC rather than gets left behind and only pops up once every 500 chapters. The author of Monarch of Time has done great developing the characters too, so if he does have the MC with more than one wife it will make sense and not be forced. I wish more authors handled characters and romance like that - keeping the MC and love interests together, letting them get stronger together, and making the relationships make sense in the story and not be forced.
ok, then it is not for me, cultivation novels do not usually like me for this, or they lose their virginity at 2000 years in chapter 600 or they do it from the first chapter and they hunt women as if they were pokemon, even raping them, it is difficult find a novel with a middle ground.
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ExquireMomo08:more like. the story will be long but the romance is short?? guess that means a bad end for them or the romance will appear near the end..
CodezL:ok, then it is not for me, cultivation novels do not usually like me for this, or they lose their virginity at 2000 years in chapter 600 or they do it from the first chapter and they hunt women as if they were pokemon, even raping them, it is difficult find a novel with a middle ground.
What I hate when what you are doing happens, that you have to wait 600 chapters for the MC to get married or at least lose his virginity, these MCs are not realistic, they are human beings with desires and weaknesses, but many authors forget of that and make them austists who only focus on cultivation.
vinayraj:I didn't understand what you are saying. .. 🤷🏻♂️
Why does he have to forget everything just to do something else? is it retarded? If it's retarded then you're right it's not my cup of tea
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actually, the book is going to very long, so compared to it, the romance fells short. .i can say it will have a minimum of 30 percent romance. ..now it's your wish to read it or not. 🙂
J_S_2998:A short romance in a long story? That’s unfortunate, even if you didn’t add a harem a story where the MC and his wife/dao companion journeyed with him and eventually became Immortals would have been great to read. Oh well, even though it’s not for me best of luck with your story.
the book is going to be very long. .. so compared to it, the romance is short. I can approximately say that it will have 30 percent of romance. .. now it's your wish whether to read or not
J_S_2998:A short romance in a long story? That’s unfortunate, even if you didn’t add a harem a story where the MC and his wife/dao companion journeyed with him and eventually became Immortals would have been great to read. Oh well, even though it’s not for me best of luck with your story.
my previous comment was a mistake. I thought it was for my other book. for this book, there will be 30 percent romance which willstart after 200 chapters. ..
CodezL:What does a brief romance mean? could you explain it to me? is the mc going to die a virgin or is he going to lose his virginity in chapter 300?
