Review Detail of Grimkin in Cultivation Online

Cultivation Online is a novel that does what it is supposed to do, there is nothing revolutionary about this webnovel however, where this novel does excel in is using the common tropes, we have seen a million times before and twisting in a way that makes it feel somewhat new. There are issues with this webnovel but if I had to take a look at the whole picture, I would say that it achieved in what I wanted with this novel going in, which is to be entertained. There are some issues with this novel though. The webnovel is written in an elementary way where the grammar, sentence structure, as well as character dialogue gives off the impression of a novel meant for tweens and younger. You may have issues with the MC in regard to how naive/ dumb he seems, but it was done intentionally as a way to highlight the character's growth later in the novel with a story element meant to give a twist, though since this is a recent development, it is yet to be seen how well the author will pull this off. The author is too heavy-handed in the haram way too early, instead of spreading them out along the novel in different areas, though you could argue the difference between his "official girlfriends" and the girls that are following him or crushing on him. The MC is also too OP in my opinion and while there are OP characters in other novels that can balance this well, the protagonist in Cultivation Online never struggles or has to put much effort into anything, which doesn't give him much character growth to the point where he can cruise through the story too easily.