Review Detail of AncientGodDragon in Rebirth Of The Villainous Crown Prince

Item: Rebirth Of The Villainous Crown Prince
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AncientGodDragonLv52yrAncientGodDragon

Very bad novel. The authors writing skills are decent but the story is full of glaring plot holes and he does whatever the fuck he wants to make the story proceed forward even if it means making the previous 100 or so chapters mean nothing. Not to mention the story pacing is very slow and he decided to make it premium after 40 till where basically nothing happens other than basic setting up of the world.

Rebirth Of The Villainous Crown Prince

ZinonWonder

Liked it!

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ZinonWonderAuthorZinonWonder

though pacing has been an issue because this was the first time I am writing a novel, I have worked it on a lot and have improved it in the chapters after the training arc. As for plotholes, tell me any one of them.

2yr

ZinonWonderAuthorZinonWonder

how is that a plot hole? it's called realistic plot. ye tian yun just knows that the manual is there, he doesn't know the full story. go and understand what a plot hole really is before you come complaining here in review section. and if you were expecting mc to get everything handed to him with zero to nil effort, you're welcome to not read this anymore.

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2yr

ZinonWonderAuthorZinonWonder

dude, he already knew xiao ming will have the manual after the banquet, and he also knew how he got it - from the library. and that's what he was trying to prevent, but it turns out it was already too late, and his info was also wrong. why was it wrong? that's related to future plot ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

2yr