Review Detail of Klaudius in Rebirth Of The Villainous Crown Prince
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A interesting story with a compelling world that unfortunately suffers from some severe pacing issues, with entire chapters dedicated to explain simple ideas, making the result feel like filler. I believe that if the author can work out this problem he is bound to be successful, since clearly he has talent.
Rebirth Of The Villainous Crown Prince
ZinonWonder
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I don't think the solution is to increase the release rate, but to "trim down the fat". Try and change your writing style to be more concise without too much repetition and overlong explanations. Is hard for me to explain because I'm not a writer, but has a reader I feel that in some chapters the information that is there is not relevant and comes out feeling as filler.
ZinonWonder:i understand this is my biggest flaws. and i m kinda confused on what should be the next step. should i increase the chapter release speed from 2ch/d to 3-4ch/d?
A suggestion, go back and try and feel the difference in pacing between the first 50 chapters and the last ones (200-250).
ZinonWonder:i understand this is my biggest flaws. and i m kinda confused on what should be the next step. should i increase the chapter release speed from 2ch/d to 3-4ch/d?
Klaudius:A suggestion, go back and try and feel the difference in pacing between the first 50 chapters and the last ones (200-250).
Klaudius:I don't think the solution is to increase the release rate, but to "trim down the fat". Try and change your writing style to be more concise without too much repetition and overlong explanations. Is hard for me to explain because I'm not a writer, but has a reader I feel that in some chapters the information that is there is not relevant and comes out feeling as filler.