Review Detail of Valman in Wizard World:Struggles of dimensions
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It's a very good story, the only flaw I find in it is its slowness and its magic that I have the impression that we show in a hurry after it's my opinion, maybe you find yourself that it's too magical but I find that it's not magical enough and that it should go deeper into it
Wizard World:Struggles of dimensions
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thank you for your review means a lot. the slowness thing can't be improved anytime soon I'm still schooling and school has been hectic lately so 5 chapters a week are probably my limit. and as for the magic i hope to improve as the story moves on. if u have any ideas about types of magic you would love to see present based on the foundation already present in the book i would love to hear it.
Will have to already talk about the type of magic you want in your book because I can give you tons of it but if it's a destructive thing and you do a good thing ... it does not work even with the most great goodness of the world
livefree:thank you for your review means a lot. the slowness thing can't be improved anytime soon I'm still schooling and school has been hectic lately so 5 chapters a week are probably my limit. and as for the magic i hope to improve as the story moves on. if u have any ideas about types of magic you would love to see present based on the foundation already present in the book i would love to hear it.