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livefreeAuthor3yrlivefree

hey everyone the author speaking, please if you have any suggestions or noticed some mistakes I made I would appreciate it if u pointed it out, I would love to get better and be able to share my ideas with the world through my stories.

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Wizard World:Struggles of dimensions

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livefreeAuthorlivefree

sure ask away

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livefreeAuthorlivefree

you know what its pretty late around here so just send ur question to livefree#9321 on discord or send a dm to loushaf on Instagram

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livefreeAuthorlivefree

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livefreeAuthorlivefree

About your first question for the Mc it doesn't really matter if the enemies are female or male dey are basically just enemies and as for ruthlessness the mc is definitely not going to be some virgin mary but he is also definitely not going be a psychopath, ill say he is chaotic neutral

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The writing style bro, although it was mentioned already and you replied to it, It might be better if you rewrite it before it gets longer or rewrite after you finish the story. There are few dialogues in it so I can't get myself to continue :) goodluck