First review i'm doing for a novel that I actually think is good! I have my concerns about the future of this novel but so far (chapter 77) 6/4/21 Everything is pretty good. World building is very nice, and the story has some mystery to it making you want to find out why things are happening and what will happen. But for concerns it may be way to early to tell but I hope these concerns are fruitless. Mainly all of my concerns are of the main character. It's been good so far but I fear of him being just a 'tool' for the novel like others novels like the sovereign of judgement. The MC in that novel had 0 character development through out the entire series which led me to drop it as he was just bent on revenge and nothing else making it boring. This isn't a revenge based novel so it's hard to put into words but I do hope we see character development and actually make friends and not just subordinates like the novel mentioned above. and cares for others outside his family. the novel I mentioned the MC felt like a tool just to push the novel forward I felt 0 connection with them and their lack of character development. MC so far is getting pretty OP which is fine because the author doesn't make the mistakes other authors make I noticed. In that they make a story just about the MC getting more OP and having plot armor without anything to add to it. The author introduces MC to other characters and their backstory to the MC. But the con there is that besides Brandon and Sergei the other characters feel very weak to the story so far. Dante is an alright character so Ill say besides MC there are 3 other characters that are interesting. I don't care much about the siblings but the author posted in a comment his brother will receive character development which makes me hope for the best but I hope he can do something to make the sister more interesting in the future. story doesn't feel slow paced nor doesn't it feel fast since we are only on day 3 out of a 90 day period which I hope we can get a time skip or something as I can see the trial world get boring after a few hundred chapters assuming it continues longer than that. But I could be wrong author has proven to be quite capable and when other beta and gamma's are introduced it could make the trial world interesting again. This is author's preference naturally but I hope he adds a love interest to the story in the future as I mentioned about connecting with a character romance can be considered the easiest and cheapest way yet at the same time IMO the best way to form a connection to a character. The MC is already playing match maker for his brother I just hope he gets his own love. And on the note of love interest I hope the author makes the love interest(if there is to be one) interesting. Make them from a different race, or make them an enemy of the MC but then they fall in love. Those romances are for some reason hard to find but are the best again IMO because they can make things interesting. a cliche and boring romance would be like the MC and Andrea fall in love or something. though hopefully their not made to be a damsel in distress in which the MC has to find the princess in another tower thats in a galaxy far away. Also the MC feels like he's only been in one tough situation hopefully the author creates more challenges for him even though he is currently pretty op. Last two things that give me concerns are the siblings and future of other planets. Starting with the siblings they give me the feeling of the MC siblings from I eat tomatoes Swallowed star novel. Where their all geniuses and made the world feel a bit cheap. I honestly have no idea how to fix this but hopefully the author can throw challenges for them where the MC can't interfere to flesh out their character and lets the readers like them instead of them riding on the coat tails of the MC. So far they show naivety about the trial world maybe do something that makes them feel fear, or have a rude wake up call would be really nice. lastly small thing I hope the other planets can content against earth instead of everyone bowing down to MC. even with the monster invasion I doubt planets will just group together to help each other out. I hope there are things that can pose a threat to MC and earth. Again it is way to early to say whether or not these concerns are going to come to fruit because so far the author has done a fantastic job and shows improvement of his writing. I just hope nothing causes him to drop this novel because it's really hard to find a good novel to read these days that are interesting. Wish you well in the future author. Also one more pro is that the author is kind so far and doesn't treat their readers like garbage unlike other novels I read on this site which caused me to drop due to not wanting to give money to support people like that so I hope everyone who reads this gives it a try and supports the author. I'd gladly pay to support this novel and author in the future if this gets monetized
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I know this is two months old but I simply stopped reading to let the chapters build up. I like binging so ill wait a little bit more for more chapters then binge them, then wait another year for the stockpile to grow. rinse and repeat
Klip:well that was long and if u stopped reading u should continue as the author has continued developing the side characters a lot but as u said the MC is not getting much development except for his powers.
Fluffles:I know this is two months old but I simply stopped reading to let the chapters build up. I like binging so ill wait a little bit more for more chapters then binge them, then wait another year for the stockpile to grow. rinse and repeat
interesting review. however I don't like your type, the group of people that see the need for an op mcto struggle and what not. go reasoned weak to strong trash if you want him struggling for every other ch. its called overpowered for a reason. Well ill give this a go, but I'll probably drop it at some point since it will probably change from being op to fake op like many others
DeathLingers:interesting review. however I don't like your type, the group of people that see the need for an op mcto struggle and what not. go reasoned weak to strong trash if you want him struggling for every other ch. its called overpowered for a reason. Well ill give this a go, but I'll probably drop it at some point since it will probably change from being op to fake op like many others