Review Detail of Sphynx_99 in I Dare Not Hope
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First of all, I love that you have so many chapters up already! I can read binge it! As for the story: I really like the romantic vibes without it being too cliché. The romance felt very realistic and it makes the struggles the FL goes through, understandable to readers. Here is my tip: Try to proofread. Sometimes I noticed some mistakes with the past tense and sometimes with the spelling. If you proofread, you can easily detect it. Overall, a very good story, loved how everything fits together. I added it to my library! Keep up the good work!
I Dare Not Hope
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It was nice to hear that you like my book. I tried to make it as realistic as I can. Sometimes, it’s hard to be your own critic and proof reader. No matter how much you kept on looking at your work, you would still missed a couple of mistakes. I really appreciate your making a point about it. English is not my first language nor did I major on it, but I’ll do what I can to clean it up. Hope you would continue to read it and comment on it if you like to, every suggestion can only make me a better writer. Thanks for a great review.
You're welcome! English isn't my first language either, so it's safe for me to say: practice makes perfect! I will keep on reading!
bishop1275:It was nice to hear that you like my book. I tried to make it as realistic as I can. Sometimes, it’s hard to be your own critic and proof reader. No matter how much you kept on looking at your work, you would still missed a couple of mistakes. I really appreciate your making a point about it. English is not my first language nor did I major on it, but I’ll do what I can to clean it up. Hope you would continue to read it and comment on it if you like to, every suggestion can only make me a better writer. Thanks for a great review.