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This is pretty good so far. I'll probably change this review once the author adds more chapters to this novel. I just hope you don't make the MC grow too fast. I would like to see MC train his basic skills to the maxiumum level as possible in middle school. Then, have him go out all ham in high school. Also, basketball is a team sport so have some teamwork moments. It's fine if there are moments MC just absolutely carries the entire team to victory and all. Please make sure not to add too much of it, or else it will just get bland and boring. Thank you author for this piece of work.
Hoops Is Life (KnB)
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I appropriate your opinion on my FanFic. This being my Second FanFic means i'm trying my best to cover up my inexperience. Though i will disclaim why i chose the MC to join Japan in 2nd Year is because In That year Teiko improved drastically example is Midorima's High arc shot. This help's with content and that year Teiko starts to break apart from improving to fast compare to their opponents. Plus Romance between Shin and Momoi. Also i'm not making Shin op where he can win a 1 vs 5 against Teiko that's why he lost in the national's, though he will be a little more talented than Nash.