The author of this book clearly doesn't care about the reader experience, the grammar is terrible. It's the type of book if you can't find any others then you might be able to skim read this for 30 minutes before getting to the point, like i did, where the grammatical errors and dumb inconsistencies just get too much.
Archdukesol
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LIKEPeople like you, who seek perfection, do not know how difficult it is for a person whose main language is not English to write something in English. I know many works that have perfect grammar and a bad story. You could just judge something by its positives points as well as the negatives ones, but you come here to say that it's bad just because it doesn't have perfect grammar. Do you know the truth? Your grammar must be as trash as your opinion. You will continue to live in your mother's basement until you die, and you will never be able to do anything good in this shitty life of yours. And that is why you feel entitled to judge someone by grammar? What are some grammatical mistakes compared to be human trash, or rather, subhuman, like you ???
Faz melhor babaca. Ah Ă©, vocĂȘ Ă© um bebe chorĂŁo desempregado que vive as custas da familia e nunca vai poder se orgulhar de nada que fez, nĂŁo Ă©? Ser hater Ă© mais facil que adimitir o merda que vocĂȘ Ă©.
OkamiI:Yes, this fanfiction is bad
LamenThief:People like you, who seek perfection, do not know how difficult it is for a person whose main language is not English to write something in English. I know many works that have perfect grammar and a bad story. You could just judge something by its positives points as well as the negatives ones, but you come here to say that it's bad just because it doesn't have perfect grammar. Do you know the truth? Your grammar must be as trash as your opinion. You will continue to live in your mother's basement until you die, and you will never be able to do anything good in this shitty life of yours. And that is why you feel entitled to judge someone by grammar? What are some grammatical mistakes compared to be human trash, or rather, subhuman, like you ???
bro, it's not just the grammar, how the characters act, man this is bad, the development of the characters is bad, bad grammar, this fanfiction is terrible
LamenThief:People like you, who seek perfection, do not know how difficult it is for a person whose main language is not English to write something in English. I know many works that have perfect grammar and a bad story. You could just judge something by its positives points as well as the negatives ones, but you come here to say that it's bad just because it doesn't have perfect grammar. Do you know the truth? Your grammar must be as trash as your opinion. You will continue to live in your mother's basement until you die, and you will never be able to do anything good in this shitty life of yours. And that is why you feel entitled to judge someone by grammar? What are some grammatical mistakes compared to be human trash, or rather, subhuman, like you ???