Review Detail of Salazarson in Harry Potter and the true wizarding world

I stopped reading because the author doesn't know what 'Show, don't tell' is. We want to read a story, not a summary. Writing Quality: 1s Stability of Updates: 1s Story Development: 2s Character Design: 1s World Background: 3s (It's already set in the HP world, so...) The total score: 1.6 (My advice, Not worth your time)