Review Detail of Ancient_Egyptian in I Reject Quests
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A very stressful novel... Don't get me wrong, The novel is not bad. It's surprisingly good BUT very had a heavy atmosphere within it ... The MC barely has any rest or relaxing time throughout the first 150-Chapters I read... The Major cause of this is his three identities. The others in the novel can't be measured easily as side characters or supporting characters or even background characters... The roles change so fast and unpredictably... Mr. author is not taking it easy on us whenever we feel that everything is okay and we can predict the next step a completely different scenario play for us and we become more confused... The MC has no real goal or plans just a collection of dangerous events and a war between his brain and his heart ... AGAIN it's very stressful and you absolutely shouldn't read it casually. The world is complicated and vague without any in-depth knowledge about it until it's become relevant to the MC. The only thing I feel for the MC for those +150 chapters is how miserable his life... no matter what fortune he chanced upon it, he always in very depressing situations.
I Reject Quests
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I would have wrote more if I don't notice that 1111 on the letters counter. But seriously I need to take a short break every 20~30 chapters and do something cheerful to remove the gloomy feelings inside of me ... You seriously aren't joking here... I can imagine someone take this novel lightly and when he suddenly reaches between 70~100 chapters he suddenly have a no idea what's going on. I hope your next novel will be more cheerful.
FreshMelon:You are absolutely spot on about world-building. I rarely give enough details unless it's important to the mc.
You can look forward to the 10 or 12 chaps after chap 155. They are light-hearted. I like writing light plots but I feel that takes some depth from the story. After this arc, the tone will become more cheerful. I will also focus on romance in the next arc.
Ancient_Egyptian:I would have wrote more if I don't notice that 1111 on the letters counter. But seriously I need to take a short break every 20~30 chapters and do something cheerful to remove the gloomy feelings inside of me ... You seriously aren't joking here... I can imagine someone take this novel lightly and when he suddenly reaches between 70~100 chapters he suddenly have a no idea what's going on. I hope your next novel will be more cheerful.