Review Detail of InfiniteZer0 in I Reject Quests
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The story is not bad, but it has a ton of sudden jumps with no context. He transmigrates to another world (this is fine so far), he plays a video game once or twice (which I have a hard time finding why he got it in the first place, he may or may not be blacksmithing- I cannot really tell. He meets 15 different people and I still don't know who is who half the time. It does not really clarify what his systems are a whole lot
I Reject Quests
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First. You are correct about jumps but I'm not sure if it's out of context. If you are asking me why would he start a fight with the girl, the answer has been stated explicitly. If you are asking why he gets a game which VR game which launched, I don't know how to answer. That's the plot? I think the mistake here is the story doesn't have a linear plotline. That's why it gets understandably confusing at times. Now. I'm having second thoughts if you read the prologue or not. If you did, you would know 'certain' things.
I definitely agree that there is an issue that I am not keeping up with the story being non-linear. As for the idol, I still not entirely sure how it started so suddenly. I get that he fell from bumping into her, and I get that he seems to want to test his strength, but it seems like he is picking a fight for pretty much no reason. As for the video game, I was understanding that the family was not super well off and Denny went and got the game without permission, but that does not explain how he got the game. Maybe I missed something there, but I was trying to see how he got started
FreshMelon:First. You are correct about jumps but I'm not sure if it's out of context. If you are asking me why would he start a fight with the girl, the answer has been stated explicitly. If you are asking why he gets a game which VR game which launched, I don't know how to answer. That's the plot? I think the mistake here is the story doesn't have a linear plotline. That's why it gets understandably confusing at times. Now. I'm having second thoughts if you read the prologue or not. If you did, you would know 'certain' things.
InfiniteZer0:I definitely agree that there is an issue that I am not keeping up with the story being non-linear. As for the idol, I still not entirely sure how it started so suddenly. I get that he fell from bumping into her, and I get that he seems to want to test his strength, but it seems like he is picking a fight for pretty much no reason. As for the video game, I was understanding that the family was not super well off and Denny went and got the game without permission, but that does not explain how he got the game. Maybe I missed something there, but I was trying to see how he got started
he didnt test his strength. he isn't stupid to do so. the idol had a condition called 'interference' which affects her mental state. Therefore, he was forced to fight her.
InfiniteZer0:I definitely agree that there is an issue that I am not keeping up with the story being non-linear. As for the idol, I still not entirely sure how it started so suddenly. I get that he fell from bumping into her, and I get that he seems to want to test his strength, but it seems like he is picking a fight for pretty much no reason. As for the video game, I was understanding that the family was not super well off and Denny went and got the game without permission, but that does not explain how he got the game. Maybe I missed something there, but I was trying to see how he got started
No. I didn't go on to explain how Denny got the game. But yeah, Denny got two games for her and mc. Because she wasn't used to the events that happened prior, she wasn't comfortable in facing the mc. She would have eventually given the game to him anyways.
InfiniteZer0:I definitely agree that there is an issue that I am not keeping up with the story being non-linear. As for the idol, I still not entirely sure how it started so suddenly. I get that he fell from bumping into her, and I get that he seems to want to test his strength, but it seems like he is picking a fight for pretty much no reason. As for the video game, I was understanding that the family was not super well off and Denny went and got the game without permission, but that does not explain how he got the game. Maybe I missed something there, but I was trying to see how he got started