I am not sure If I am following up with this story. It's very dark and trouble is popping up everywhere the mc goes. The MC don't even have chance to power up, but he is against 4-5th rank mage, odd with his family. Overall, it's a good story, but too dark for me. Good luck author.
FreshMelon
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LIKEI think you should start solving some of the prob of mc. He's getting dragged into many probs without solving the previous probs. And adding too many will confuse people. If its for mystery its fine. But whatever he can solve by his own he should do it to clear up some plotline. Its already confusion for some people the thing about the Transmigration. Game/Npc/New World/X/Fallen Devil/Transference/Family prob(both real life and in game)/Sveti/Relationship with his cousin and friends/And lastly so many system. There are many things. Which needs clear up for some people. Take your time but do it.
FreshMelon:thank you for giving this novel a try!
to be honest, I have the same thoughts. If possible, I want to solve the problems as soon as I can but its not even been a week in the world. if I go solving problems, it would be half-assed. don't worry about it though. after the current arc, some of the problems will come to an end. your feedback is much appreciated. if you want to talk more about it, here's my discord: FreshMelon#4303
SujayPatra:I think you should start solving some of the prob of mc. He's getting dragged into many probs without solving the previous probs. And adding too many will confuse people. If its for mystery its fine. But whatever he can solve by his own he should do it to clear up some plotline. Its already confusion for some people the thing about the Transmigration. Game/Npc/New World/X/Fallen Devil/Transference/Family prob(both real life and in game)/Sveti/Relationship with his cousin and friends/And lastly so many system. There are many things. Which needs clear up for some people. Take your time but do it.