The story so far is amazing! I absolutely enjoyed reading this and I certainly look forward to the continuing chapters. The world background and character design is quite decent in my opinion, however, I do think that some side characters lack detail. There were a few mistakes in your story, such as missing words, incorrect grammar and punctuation. I think the story could be updated faster, but it still only depends on the author so I won't complain much. Out of all this story was great and I look forward to reading more.
Lruska
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