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Romanna_abdo
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A disappointing novel he knows what is coming but wasting time he knows alot of problems of which he will face but still wasting time all he is doing is focus on harem too much to the degree of going out of main goal of the story all about revenge gathering women wasting his time with them all the night instead of recalling his past skills practicing them again no plan for the future when he got to know about there other system users should accelerate his what called plans he wastes time again when imarting his cultivation manual to his disciple he imparted his uniqe one which first needs to die first oh wow he can cultivate it with no issue then like an idiot granting something that should get him an edge over others to others forgetting the betrayal of his friends auther please read your novel again it is a waste if you cannot keep track on what you are writing did you forgot that he can break from the restriction if he become stronger than the creator of the artifact ?? then again in just 60 chapters i see he got over 4 girls you plan on getting more in the future then ???! thats too much no matter what waste too many of plots and time reading repeatable thing tag say harem but just from scratch we got more than 4 women really ?? there is whole world suppose to come and ah when he time traveled the enemy sensed him this changes alot of things like s day is not coming in two years but sooner you didn't even make thing that the changes he is applaying is changing main time line ?? to people who want to read this if you want just skip time or something maybe it works other than that not worth it in my point of view (i read over sixty chpater only so if it gets better after thats okey for you but for me nah a trash waste of 60 chapters could be done in 35 to 40 so for yourself that)

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