Review Detail of CJRealJ in Hogwarts Dawn Of The New Era

There isn't much to go on yet but I'm liking it so far, the difference in humanity between metropolis muggles and wizards is shown clearly. The Mc was even (naturally) completely suspicious of the strangely gentle treatment he received from the wizards as he was never treated as a human being before. Instead of just adding Harry Potter and cyberpunk, the story is trying to show the changes that occurred between the magical and the muggles world. Any big event in one world somewhat changed the other and that's a nice touch. There isn't much to say about the characters so far but they seem realistic as far as I can tell. The grammar and vocabulary isn't hideous. In fact I haven't really noticed any mistakes and I think this story has a potential so long as it is not rushed. I'm no expert but as long as the author expands on the world building and the characters, this can really turn into one hell of a gem. So good luck Mr. Writer.