Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in Supreme Demon Lord

Item: Supreme Demon Lord
Rating: 5

Review detail

Mel_AnivLv43yrMel_Aniv

A story with good narrations! Descriptions were vivid and enjoyed the ride. Try be metaphoric sometimes on descriptions and the flow will be better. I say your story was awesome based on what I read. The character was likable and it was an epic read!

Supreme Demon Lord

mel0n

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mel0nAuthormel0n

Thanks for the review! Can you explain a little more to me about what you mean concerning being more metaphoric?

3yr

Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Being more descriptive like show don't tell system..example..(not metaphoric) he gave his left hand to him......(metaphoric) He lent his left hand covered with random patterned scars that has wrinkles and was thin enough to be called impoverished and lacks nutrition. It was skin to bones and lacks muscles underneath the skin that made his handshake to be weightless.

mel0n:Thanks for the review! Can you explain a little more to me about what you mean concerning being more metaphoric?

3yr

Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Try researching about tips on google san..he knows more than I do.

mel0n:Thanks for the review! Can you explain a little more to me about what you mean concerning being more metaphoric?

3yr

mel0nAuthormel0n

I gotcha. Thanks man! I really appreciate the feedback and the tips

Mel_Aniv:Try researching about tips on google san..he knows more than I do.

3yr

Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

You're welcome!

mel0n:I gotcha. Thanks man! I really appreciate the feedback and the tips

3yr