Review Detail of Mystery1 in Sakura Timetravel

Hi to Everyone from Author, hope you're having a good time. This is my very first story that I wrote as a child and decided to recently upload on this platform. I know it is not to detailed and lacks certain things but I decided not to change anything. I will keep this has memory which I will use to write better stories in the future. So anyone who has something negative to say should stay away. Criticism is not appreciated.