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As of chapter 52: (haven't read the chapters after) I really like the story so far. The pros are that there is character development. Spoiler: I like his relationship with his sister and i think that the split personality makes sense as it is not east for a person to change drastically however, i feel that its introduction is quite abrupt. Like there was no transition. It was just *pop* and there it is. Otherwise it's great and i like his ruthlessness

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yeah, I also think that the transition failed, I am trying something new in this novel, so... sorry.. if I didn't gave you what you were expecting.. thank you for your precious review and I'll keep you advice in my mind for my future novels