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Review Detail of InHisName in Race to The Throne

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InHisName
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A story of how an underworld kingpin (after dying) transmigrates into a world closely resembling ancient China. The greatest problem with this story? Story development, and character design. This story is driven by the protagonist (every character other than the cliche kind old sister trope may as well not even exist). This means that the characterisation of the protagonist is immensely important. However...the protagonist's characterisation is all over the place. The protagonist during his past life was a cold, brutal, ruthless kingpin. After transmigrating, he meets his old sister...and in an instant his heart begins to soften. What kind of silliness is this? As the story goes on, the protagonist decides he must be a 'good guy' for the sake of the people who care for him (his mother, and older sister). This characterisation is so naive and silly that it left me absolutely flabbergasted. A story with good potential ruined by the hypocritical redemption of the protagonist.

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thanks for your honest thoughts on the novel, though there are things I would like to point out but I don't want to give any spoiler so... thank you for sharing your opinion