Review Detail of Babybear in 3 hours - A Gamble Of Time.

Item: 3 hours - A Gamble Of Time.
Rating: 4.6

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BabybearLv13yrBabybear

I really applaud you, author for writing such a story. I really like it. From the very beginning, I began to get attached to the story. I especially like how Dave shows his love for Xara like that. the moment he thought: Who knew brown eyes are just brown eyes till you fall in love with them." I really love this sentence. it sounds so romantic and better than some cliche ones. it really hit hard. thank you for the amazing work author. I really really appreciate it.[img=recommend]

3 hours - A Gamble Of Time.

Gaureeey

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BabybearLv1Babybear

please don't feel bad about it. those stars were missed just cause of some grammatical errors and the stability of the updates, but more than anything just because I cried😭😭 thank you for the good work. I really love it and still read it despite those little errors.❤❤

Gaureeey:Can u tell me what missed the 0.4 stars? It would help me get better and re-edit! nevertheless thank you for your feedback it motivated me soooooooo much! [img=recommend]

3yr

GaureeeyAuthorGaureeey

Can u tell me what missed the 0.4 stars? It would help me get better and re-edit! nevertheless thank you for your feedback it motivated me soooooooo much! [img=recommend]

3yr

GaureeeyAuthorGaureeey

OMG NOOOO THATS NOT WHAT I MEANT! i really needed an honest feedback, thank u soooo much for helping me out with where I lacked YOURE THE NICESSSST

Babybear:please don't feel bad about it. those stars were missed just cause of some grammatical errors and the stability of the updates, but more than anything just because I cried😭😭 thank you for the good work. I really love it and still read it despite those little errors.❤❤

3yr