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Review Detail of ldoronoco in Taoist Antecedent of the Yellow Court

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ldoronoco
ldoronocoLv143yrldoronoco

Ch-10 - This story is doing the most for no reason. MC Background - Either the MC came from a futuristic time or the 21st century - never made clear MC - No idea why the author choose to reincarnate this guy - There's no need, nothing makes him unique, his system is given on the cheap, not a savvy MC; He complains about not having meat, kills a leopard and just leaves the body - bruh The system / game - The game settings are strange, who would wait 16 human years for their character to reset - it feel complicated for no reason MTL - Seems to end at 768 with Author admitting to having plot holes and rushed the ending

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Taoist Antecedent of the Yellow Court

Bewitching Hua Wuque

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Mute
MuteLv13Mute

Ended at less than 1k chapters? That's sad, it's slow paced and i liked that, they either rush it later or mc never gets that strong.

Garret
GarretLv6Garret

Hopefully he learns from this and writes an amazing novel next,as this novel had more thing done right compared to a lot of the trash on this site that are popular.