I hope more chapters are coming soon! I can't give much input because there are only 3 chapters but maybe dive more into Chris and his interactions with other characters? Have him bond with team members to see who he likes and dislikes (in a general sense - not romantically). Change aspects of the story to see how his presence affects the story as a whole, stuff like that. Anyways, I'm looking forward to an update!
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