For writing quality I've noticed numerous errors and mistakes, and while it's simple to figure out what it was supposed to say, it's still troubling. Haven't seen an update in a while. The story is okay, though I can't really get excited for the MC if I don't know what their end goal is, or if the is an actual threat. Characters are pretty ok, nothing really stands out to me though, their personality's are hard to pin down, one moment Valli is a diplomat and the next he's siphoning off energy from a goddess. Background is good though, providing enough info to understand the current state of the world.
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