Review Detail of amaturewriter in Instant Mastery In Harry Potter (English)

I tried being open minded but this bk is just shallow characters. in each chp the MC handsomeness is explained at least one, like thats the focus. And every chick is enamored by this guy and and it just makes em look shallow. OMG he so handsome...what a prince. thats their mentality, that's presented And theres also the fact that bellatix just trusts this guy within a couple hrs of meeting and takes him to meet her family. bellatrix.... so basically character is OC. I get its AU, but the blacks family ' character ' was untrusting, cold, secretive, arrogant, etc. here they are all open friendly. not a hint of the original shit is here. its all OC. Plus the black family accepts what he says just like that, like no distrust or suspicion or even wariness, nothing. They just believe what this stranger says. Another thats just stupid is the plot used as an excuse for stupid shit. what? well the MC's family was exterminated by voldy cause of their power,etc but MC survived and he managed to become world famous.... "Dovahkiin heir, by chance you are "Max the tyrant dragon", who is a recognized and world famous bounty hunter for catching many criminals, he is also the world dueling champion for 3 consecutive years and great historian of the history of magic, that's you." [ C4 ] how was the MC even allowed to achieve such accomplishments with no backing, and not being hunted down ? especially during a time where voldy had power and also when he destroyed the family?...wishes [ MC wished to be SI'd into a body in early 20's, with a past already build ]....and that just ruins a bk for me. honestly why bother writing when wish can simply be used as an excuse to do shit like this? no story, no character build and it just allows retarded shit like this to happen. The theres the merlins beard shit in C5 [ unless removed ]....not sure if its supposed to be funny cause it just ruins every characters personality and tone of the moment so basically just turn of ur brain and ignore any sense of logic and you'll enjoy this. the good thing about this bk is the time, maruders era, it kinda makes it a gem but the shallow characters, almost completely forced interactions and somewhat cringe characters ruin it