Review Detail of Doge_Blade in Journey To Being A God

is my writing that bad?

I thought I have improved

its meh level, mainly spelling and grammar

its also a bit rushed, but dont give up, maybe revise your beginning chapters and get something like grammarly? all in all, its pretty good and the writing quality is what needs work

From what I have seen so far grammarly doesn't help unless you have a general understanding of the rules for that particular language, so it is a bad advice, the good advice would be to make a list of rules that you find broken in the text, so that author can actually understand what the problem is.