Overall the story is intriguing i like the concept that a reader getting sucked inside the novel and what most interest me is what will be Xarth's interaction with the Main character of the novel.The writing quality is good in my perspective story development is great but i would like you to work more on your Grammar on how you describe a certain scenario but in any case it's a good read.
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