Review Detail of EmptyLogic in FGO Nasional?
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Very good, but the story itself is pretty bland cause of other characters, and it seems like the mc isn't the mc, the author should've said that there are multiple mcs...(I'm not saying this because the there are multiple mcs but, it really feels like the story isn't focused on the mc...) The story pace is slow, it takes 50+ chapters to complete a singularity. The author doesn't always go to the main point, and likes to stall things for the chapters to be longer, there's always this comedy that isn't even funny... Overall it's pretty good because there's morgan out there, but the relationship with morgan is pretty bland, it feels like morgan is just there to be a flex to others, and doesn't do anything at all, and mc just ignores her, like what? Morgan is his first servant, when will the author take their relationship to the next level? It has benn 200+ chapters
FGO Nasional?
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Actually I've said it from the start that there will be several MC's, maybe you missed this. Yes you're right. The story is a bit slow, I'll try to speed it up later, plus there will be skips in some Singularities because the story is less interesting for me (Oceanos and London) The problem with Morgan, I did try to create a story with him, but sadly.... I'm not very good at telling things like romance. I'll try, but it might get a little weird. At least, anyway I'm still thanks to you. Because you can give me advice like this, thanks guys ๐๐๐๐๐๐
No problem, I really like this book, I also hope you can skip those two singularity and summarize them for the readers to know why the time skip happened, I like reading fate fanfics, and this is one of my favorites.
Yuuya3:Actually I've said it from the start that there will be several MC's, maybe you missed this. Yes you're right. The story is a bit slow, I'll try to speed it up later, plus there will be skips in some Singularities because the story is less interesting for me (Oceanos and London) The problem with Morgan, I did try to create a story with him, but sadly.... I'm not very good at telling things like romance. I'll try, but it might get a little weird. At least, anyway I'm still thanks to you. Because you can give me advice like this, thanks guys ๐๐๐๐๐๐
EmptyLogic:No problem, I really like this book, I also hope you can skip those two singularity and summarize them for the readers to know why the time skip happened, I like reading fate fanfics, and this is one of my favorites.