Review Detail of US_DreamerDon in Olivia Milan - A Bad Girl Story

The first chapter lays out an interesting character. And the pacing is alright. I think the author could write her characters' description into the story instead of outright telling the reader. I like the foreshadow of the drama that'll rise up later in the second chapter when they're deciding schools. All in all, a great story that I can see going far. Please keep up the writing.