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I like how the character's traits are instantly developed, but I feel like that worked as a double-edged sword too. While pushing her arrogance to the extreme opens ton of room for character development throughout the story, it made it hard to read at the start because of how toxic her whole vibe was, at least in my opinion. Good work though, keep it up!

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Olivia Milan - A Bad Girl Story

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That is the main reason... toxic vibe😜