Review Detail of UncrownedKing in Ghost Girl of MHA (Rewrite in progress)

The love intrest and half god are the definition of a turn off when you look at the story from the outside. I’ll give it shot though but, really rethink on what it is that you are planning. Hope that MC isn’t OP

Well most of that stuff doesn't come into play until what is planned to be part 2 so you wouldn't have to sit through it. The love interest has already tentatively changed for now but I'm open to switching it back to who I originally intended if enough people want it. as for hoping that she's not op... I mean, you must not have seen danny phantom if you hope for that.

even without being half god she would still be op just because of the Danny phantom powers

if I may be so bold, how's the rewrite going? It's been a few months, just checking to see if you're alright?

the rewrite fell flat. I just couldn't really nail anything down outside of rearranging a lot of the existing chapters. I've put this one on hold for a while now and I can kind of tell I don't have the right mindset for it anymore. That said, pretty soon I'm going to be releasing a new my hero fic. chapter 1 and 2 are done and just need fixing up. I'm hoping that by working on this new one I can spark some ideas for this older one.

Okay, thanks for the update. I'll keep an eye out. Love this so far and I also checked out what you've got for the Succubus one.

that one too is going to be getting a rewrite. luckily since I didn't get very far with it the rewrite was way easier for that one. I'll likely be uploading for the two of them at the same time when I start back. it's basically the same just the way she gets the new phone is changed a bit and her relationship with her parents and teacher is different.

are you still Writing? or dropped

this one is on hiatus for now. I had quite a bit of it rewritten but I just wasn't feeling it anymore. kinda got bored of mha. I was going to open a poll and ask if anyone would be interested in this being a DC story, but ultimately I decided to use a different powerset for that story so the people who came for mha didn't feel alienated. I plan to pick this up again probably when mha ends so I can have a clearer goal and know what characters i need to work with.

Thanks for the news. Hope you get a lot of inspirations.

wasn´t this going to be worldtravel? Startpoint was MHA if i remember right. & you don´t need to follow the cannon xD simply say you are xx years before/after the cannon.

For now I've dropped it completely. Took me a while to admit but I'm honestly just burnt out on MHA. I get bored just thinking about it. That said, I do still love the characters I made for this story so I'll likely try to pick it back up eventually, but unfortunately that likely won't be anytime soon.

oh, sad to hear. tough on the other hand, why not retake the same story like it happened & change the world, together with the others setting? i think only a few mentions where there about it being directly linked to MHA. wo yeah, change it into a other modern world? Fate / Harry Potter / Marvel / Arifureta or so. instead of "hero" duty for bishamonten give her a business to lead or so^^. well, that´s my idea. if it helps, great :D btw on a sidenote. if you ever make a WoW fanfic in that world i would appreciate it, don´t think a good WoWfanfic exists, or is very hidden.

i actually did plan to redo this story in a different world, specifically DC. but i ran into some complications with the setting and myself. the story got a lot darker than i was really expecting. as i mentioned in one of the updates or a comment, idr, i wasn't really feeling the whole rob thing anymore so the reason for rika to become a ghost became a lot different. long story short, i didn't like it and ultimately decided to scrap it. i did however split that into a story about gwen tennyson in DC that i might post one day. in any case if i do just put the characters in a different setting it'll probably be a combined setting of different cartoons like jackie chan adventures, american dragon, kim possible, etc. we'll see what happens.

that´s interessting too, well i hope to see both storys sometime in the future^^