Review Detail of FakasMadasOMG in Sirius: Evolution of A Star

The novel seems promising, until the chapters that I have read (chap 7) at the moment everything is going well, the speed of development also seems correct to me, I cannot say much about world background, since it only takes a few chapters, but if the author works well, can be a great novel, but for a more deep review this needs more chapters to know if the novel can be or not good