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Lutz_
Lutz_Lv112yrLutz_

the story is pretty good in the first few chapters, but after that the story gets worse. when compared to what I read in the synopsis and what the actual story was, it really didn't live up to my expectations. at the beginning of mc's story is quite promising, i think the story will be very interesting. but after a few chapters he meets a stranger and then the stranger threatens mc, mc gets scared and he becomes that person's dog. a few chapters later mc already mentioned the stranger who considered mc as a dog as a friend. mc is too jolly goofy in the story. and there's the stranger I mentioned earlier, taking advantage of mc and the girls around him. to be honest if this was written from that foreigner(Kyle) point of view, our mc(Mikael) would just look like a stupid underling and side character. but because this is from Mikael's point of view, but everything is coordinated and arranged by Kyle, so mc doesn't have his charm in this story. mc is just like a side character acting as a loyal dog to Kyle

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MC's not part of the story

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Big_Hank
Big_HankLv1Big_Hank

mc's not part of the story lol :D

Captain_Fighter
Captain_FighterLv1Captain_Fighter

HAHAHAHAHHAHAHA

Big_Hank:mc's not part of the story lol :D