Review Detail of Jaxer30 in Xianshi Inn (A contemporary Xianxia novel)

First of all, English is not my first language. Second of all, I'm really surprised that people haven't found your story yet, it's very interesting and different from other stories I've read. To the actual review as of chap 69 (nice) : As I said before, the premise is fresh and the story is very intriguing. The characters are interesting, even if they are kind of dumb sometimes and their reactions are illogica. There are some people that are too thrusting of complete strangers, like the influences at the hotel or the workers of the movie studio. Another thing that really bothered me is that you don't label the time clearly, jumping between past and present without warning. I said that in a comment and will repeat it again, it was confusing and jarring to jump from the hotel to the past without any hint. I'll continue reading this, this has potential and I liked it so far. You have my support! Have a great day