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Review Detail of book_234 in Avatar The Last Airbender: Cold Paths

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Honest review from reader prospective. First and foremost i have to admit that I really liked it, as i have read until the last chapter available (chp 87). As such my rating isn't stupidly high because even if I have really appreciated the read, there clearly is space for improvement. The most lacking part I have noticed is the writing quality. The first chapters in particular are terrible, there are some visible mistakes and mostly the punctuation is terrible. For example I remember seeing a really hard abuse of "..." every so often, and is surely annoying. However after the first ten chapters the quality rises to a sufficient level, and the read become quite enjoyable. The other negative thing I have to mention, is that i found the general descriprion of the world machanics and the various scenarious a bit lacking. Anyway in the end I would certainly recommend you to give the novel a try. As the story developement and character design really captivated me. Happy reading [img=update]

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Avatar The Last Airbender: Cold Paths

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