Review Detail of The_Hero_Of_Old in System's Origin

the story is alright but all over the place with consistent plot holes with really ehh characters, the Mc feels like an edgy kid who most times says something cringy. it feels like there's no true struggle throughout the worlds he's traveling to. the Witcher had his powered sealed for just a few chapters to then unlock and basically makes the whole Witcher trials and relevant. then talking about revolutionizing the world with alien tech and modern tech just ruins the whole world placement. character constantly talks about wanting a vacation and rest but suddenly he thinks about world domination or changing the whole world. all together the story didn't lead me feeling wanting for more or any sense of excitement to know what happens next. But good luck author even though I didn't like it doesn't mean other won't.