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I don’t do romance nor female lead and I am happy I got to chapters with zero romance starting and no smut scenes. Your story is very interesting and good, the mythology only adds to it. I love the way tou describe things and your characterization is so good tht I was enjoying a female lead story; and that is rare for me. I like Gen, she is funny to me. You have tiny grammar mistakes, which is okay because everyone makes mistakes, it doesn’t take from the story at all. I love your pacing. Most people get into the romance and stuff while you actually build your story up, I enjoy that. That is what makes a story good. Keep up the good work!

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Thank you for taking the time to review my story, I really appreciate that! And thank you even more for the words of praise. It's a romance, but I don't want it to be *just* a love story, so I'm happy to hear that's coming across right. It could use some editing, so I plan on taking the time for that soon. I used to do it in between writing, but I always end up overediting which shows in the storyline, so I've decided to do things different this time.