Review Detail of Daoist_Everwind in NPC into Player: Let's Wreck This Game

Quite unique ideas for a novel as I haven't seen ithers that have similar concepts. The writing however is quite poor... It's bad to the point that I just can't indulge myself in the story. I understand that it's an original and might not be edited yet but I just can't make myself to read this at it's current state. Anyways, the author has an interesting novel here and hopefully a decent storyline too. I'll read it again after it got edited.[img=recommend]