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Romance and female lead isnt my thing. The one thing I love about First POV is that you cannot tell the gender of the person you reading until someone mentions it. Your descriptions are written really well, giving the feel and image of the story. I like the charcaters interaction. The problem is you have small grammar mistakes that don’t take away from the story and a spacing problem. It is like you hit the spacing twice on a few of your words. Also, maybe shorten the long paragraphs (?). Keep up the good work!
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I need to find an editor, for sure. I wrote something along the lines of thirty chapters in the first week and was more focused on speed. Thank you for the review! It means a lot. (I actually only put in "Girl" from Heru after someone mistook the MC as a man. I don't like novels that shove gender, power, or exposition down your throat) I am almost sure I will never physically describe her, to make it easier to make what the reader likes. I do try to shorten the paragraphs later, that's one thing that my readers have all said LOL! Again, thanks so much!!!!