Review Detail of AlphaOmega12 in Force Of Change

The story is a mix of medieval fantasy and xianxia genre. I will try to make it realistic as possible by giving history, culture and such to make it more engaging. The character personalities would also be realistic. I will slowly build upon everything and the main character will not be overpowered. There will be no harem and there is only a small chance of romance happening. There will be tragedy. There will be misha** as no one is perfect and no one can plan for everything. The mc is wizened man in his forties so he is someone who has already lived through many trials and is chosen for his qualities. He will grow in power and even personality as even he has something he lacks. My writing isn't very good but i will go with it and hope that you guys can enjoy. Initially all these chapters are just the draft version and i will edit them once i finish a checkpoint. I will add more details and such so your opinion matters a lot.