Your story is incredibly good. Writing Quality: Your writing quality is good. It's just that there are some problems with capitalisation of certain words, sentence structure and spelling. You do have a good grasp of your words though. Well done. Stability of Updates: I have nothing to say here. Story Development: Your story development is steady. You've really grasped the correct pace for a romance story. Well done. Character Design: I do like your characters. It's just that they seem a little too flawless. I would prefer if you showed a little more flaws in their personality or appearance. World Background: I have nothing to say here.
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