Review Detail of Omega_ in Omnitrix in Marvel

First review but this... Honestly this is a good fic like stop reading my review and read this masterpiece, i love the original concepts such as Winter Guard and the take on Creel and every character has nice development and its a great story with good original concepts and a good plot with characters that are really good. grammar is nigh perfect with only slight easily fixed errors, the world building is nice like the expansion on things like the savage lands and the fic honestly seems like a proffesional writer most times. If you like Ben 10 and Marvel this is for you. If I were to rate it. Plot: 10/10 The concepts are original, however it starts a tad slow in the beginning but in my opinion it was fine some may not enjoy the slower beginning pace but stay strong and keep reading. Character design and development 10/10 Characters dont start perfect but they steadily get better and learn from previous mistakes really giving the readers satisfaction when you see our amazing MC learn and grow as the story progresses, like author really nailed the progression speed, not too slow, not too quick. World Building Again 10/10 Since its a fic it doesnt need much world building since marvel itself does that, however it does have interesting spins on already existing places or comepletely new ones. Like the secret bases in the Hydra War Arc Grammar 9.9/10 like honestly it really is top notch and at the beginning there were slight mistakes but it steadily improved so I would give it 10/10 but those havent been edited. All in all its an amazing fic with an amazing author, take my vote man.