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LuciensThe
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Right off the bat, This is an excellent read. but it does have some issues : 1. It's very slow, first readers have to focus a bit to understand what's happening for the first 30 chapters and some of the later arcs as well. 2. Its advisable to take your time while reading as even binge reading gets a bit confusing. 3. The author has to work on the pacing of the novel. its just slightly off, you should give extra breathing room to the readers. 4.The story arcs are longer by atleast 10 chapters for each arc, which takes too much out of the readers. 5. The world building is really good, though we could have an explanation a bit earlier, character design is done well. I hope this helps, it is an excellent read do not miss this novel.

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