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voidheart
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Author here with the shameless review I made this novel to become the best fap novel with a bit of a story and a system I want novel for all horny people out there to fap to it and treat it like ****

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Ancient_Egyptian
Ancient_EgyptianLv13Ancient_Egyptian

at least make a long chapters.

Ancient_Egyptian
Ancient_EgyptianLv13Ancient_Egyptian

Also, I feel if you put some effort into this then you are going to make something good.

Ancient_Egyptian
Ancient_EgyptianLv13Ancient_Egyptian

Maybe you can take it seriously... Who knows you might succeed in writing a great novel?

KoRSito
KoRSitoLv4KoRSito

you have a good story .. the subject is good. Not to mention the taboo touch with the aunt, the fantasies with the maids and the Milf friends (of the aunt) ... maybe you could even add a stepmom. being that the MC's father is absent .. it could be that his father was actually going to marry a statuesque milf that the MC could later fall in love with and then seduce .. 🤔🤔 the chapters are a bit short .. but very good work