Writing quality needs a total overhaul as there are tons of mistakes (i.e. grammar, spelling, meaning etc.) I highly advise author to read English dictionary to broaden your vocabulary. the path on how the story goes is a bit confusing as there are tons of inconsistencies to the story development itself. MC is a bit idiotic as a reincarnated individual with a knowledge from earth 'otaku' he can't seem to plan ahead. Updates are good as well as the world background except the power scaling. Kudos and I hope this review will help you further in your path author-san.
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